Mise-en-scene recreation: Learner response
Mise-en-scene recreation: Learner response
Create a new blogpost called 'Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner response'. Make sure your completed recreation video is uploaded to YouTube and embedded in the blogpost.
1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full.
- It’s brilliant to get your first practical piece of work completed and uploaded – video editing is annoying at first but the more you do it the more it all makes sense. Practice is everything!
- In terms of mise-en-scene, costume is a strength with the grey tracksuit matching the original Rocky scene really well. You’ve also got the riverside/canal location that fits with the original.
- The location that perhaps is not so effective is the press ups as it’s clearly a living room / domestic space rather than a boxing ring or gym-type location. One to consider for future projects.
- The other big bit of feedback from this project is the audio tracks. The music works but you still have the audio tracks from the video which means you can hear the direction and instructions to actors. It’s not related to mise-en-scene but it’s a great lesson for future editing projects as you need to edit with headphones on or audio up and check your work carefully before exporting. In this case, you needed to either drag the video file only on to the timeline or alternatively drop the volume from the video clips down to zero so we can’t hear the instructions to actors.
2) Type up a summary of the feedback you have had from the rest of the class - bullet points is fine.
Record the push-up scene in a boxing gym
The camerawork and the acting was both good
The setting of where I shot the running scene
3) Use all the feedback you've been given to write your own self-assessment of your video using WWW (What Went Well) and EBI (Even Better If...)
WWW - The acting and the actor placement were both good, the scene where the boxing coach said you're going to get them.
EBI - The setting for the push-ups, did it in a house, do it in the boxing gym.
4) Now reflect on your own work in more detail. How did your planning (script, shot list) help clarify and develop your ideas?
5) Thinking technically, how could you improve your work for future videos? (E.g. filming, editing, audio levels etc.)
6) Finally, what have you learned regarding the importance of mise-en-scene in film and television? Write a paragraph to answer this.
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